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Winter Solstice, Yule, Christmas—What’s the Deal?

Winter solstice, Yule, and Christmas—the awkward trio at the pub of winter celebrations. If you’ve ever wondered how these seemingly different events overlap, whether Christianity pinched Yule and called it Christmas, or how they all feed into each other like some festive Ouroboros, then get comfy. We’re sticking our noses into history, mythology, and a sprinkling of witchy cheek to unravel it all.

Winter Solstice: The OG Festival

Let’s start with the big one. The winter solstice, also known as Midwinter, is the astronomical event that’s been celebrated for millennia. It’s the shortest day and the longest night of the year, which naturally led our ancestors to freak out a little. “The sun’s fucked off! Will it come back?!” Spoiler: it always does.

Ancient peoples, from the Norse to the Romans to the Celts, marked this event with celebrations to coax the sun back or honour its eventual return. Think feasting, fires, and enough mead to fuel a small army. Some key solstice traditions included:

• Lighting fires and candles to symbolise the returning light.

• Decorating with evergreen plants, like holly and ivy, which symbolised life persisting through the darkest days.

• Sacrificing animals (or bread, depending on your resources) to curry favour with the gods.

The solstice isn’t about one specific religion. It’s nature doing its thing, and humans being humans decided to party about it.

Yule: The Norse Midwinter Binge

Now, Yule is basically the Norse god of winter celebrations. Its roots are in paganism, particularly among Germanic and Norse peoples. Yule’s main vibe? Surviving the darkest time of the year by eating, drinking, and honouring the natural world (and a few terrifying gods).

Key Yule Traditions:

• The Yule Log. Not just a chocolate cake, my friend. Originally, it was an actual log that people would set on fire for 12 days to keep the darkness at bay. The ashes were then used for protection magic.

• Wassailing. Essentially going door-to-door singing and demanding booze. Sound familiar? That’s because wassailing is the scrappy ancestor of carolling.

• Honouring the Wild Hunt. The Norse believed the god Odin led a ghostly hunt across the skies during Yule. To avoid becoming accidental prey, people stayed inside, left offerings, and generally didn’t piss off Odin.

Yule was a time to commune with the spirits of nature, ancestors, and, occasionally, a tipsy god who might be riding through the clouds on his way to slaughter you.

Christmas: Christianity’s New Kid on the Block

Here’s where things get… layered. Christianity didn’t exactly steal Yule, but it definitely borrowed liberally and rebranded like a marketing genius. When early Christians were spreading their message, they realised that people weren’t so hot about giving up their beloved midwinter festivals. So instead of cancelling them, they overlaid Christian meaning.

Jesus wasn’t even born in December—historical evidence suggests a spring or autumn birth (try and get the Catholics to concede to that school of thought, I dare you). But December 25th was chosen for Christmas because it coincided with:

• Saturnalia. A Roman festival honouring Saturn, involving feasting, gift-giving, and general chaos.

• Dies Natalis Solis Invicti (Day of the Unconquered Sun). A Roman celebration of—you guessed it—the sun’s return.

• Yule. The Germanic folks weren’t about to stop honouring Odin and his mates, so Christianity gave them Jesus instead.

So no, Christmas isn’t purely “stolen” from Yule. It’s more like an artistic collage: Saturnalia + Solstice + a side of pagan ritual = Christmas.

Saturnalia and Dies Natalis Solis Invicti

When we think of the midwinter holidays, Yule often steals the show for pagans and witches. But the Romans were also knee-deep in their own raucous celebrations, and their influence on Christmas is impossible to ignore. Let’s have a look at the two Roman festivals that fed into the creation of Christmas: Saturnalia and Dies Natalis Solis Invicti (The Day of the Unconquered Sun).

Saturnalia: The Party of Parties

Saturnalia was the Roman festival dedicated to Saturn, the god of agriculture, wealth, and liberation. It kicked off on December 17th and initially lasted for a single day, but because the Romans loved an excuse to party, it soon extended to a week or more. If the winter solstice was the time to honour the natural world, Saturnalia was when humans celebrated themselves—with chaos, laughter, and getting pissed up— has much actually changed?

Key Saturnalia Traditions…

• Role Reversals. During Saturnalia, societal norms were flipped on their heads. Masters served their slaves, and slaves got to boss their masters around (hello? 12 days of misrule vibes anyone?) It was a world turned upside down, much like a carnival.

• Gift-Giving. Romans exchanged small tokens, often candles or figurines, symbolising light returning and shared joy. Sound familiar? This was a precursor to modern Christmas gift-giving.

• Public Feasting and Drinking. Excess was encouraged. Think of Saturnalia as an ancient office Christmas party—people got hammered and embarrassed themselves in front of their boss, who, conveniently, was also drunk.

• Gambling. Normally frowned upon, gambling became a free-for-all during Saturnalia, especially with dice games.

The Vibe: Saturnalia was wild, irreverent, and fun—a time to shake off the year’s stresses and enjoy communal merriment. Early Christians couldn’t stop the Saturnalia steamroller, so they layered Christmas over it, retaining the feasting, gift-giving, and general good vibes.

Dies Natalis Solis Invicti: The Day of the Unconquered Sun

Now this one might be new to you, and honestly, it’s a bit of a hidden gem in winter festival history. While Saturnalia was all about human partying, Dies Natalis Solis Invicti had a cosmic focus: the return of the sun.

The Romans celebrated Dies Natalis Solis Invicti on December 25th as part of their devotion to Sol Invictus, the sun god. “Unconquered” referred to the sun’s ability to persist and return stronger after the darkest days of the year—a theme closely tied to the winter solstice.

Emperor Aurelian officially established this festival in 274 CE to unite the empire under the worship of Sol Invictus. It was a clever political move to blend pagan traditions into one cohesive celebration.

Key Themes of Dies Natalis Solis Invicti

• Sun Worship: People honoured the invincible sun as the ultimate life force. Without it, crops wouldn’t grow, life wouldn’t exist, and frankly, nothing would get done.

• Cosmic Renewal: The festival symbolised the triumph of light over darkness, a theme so universal it was irresistible to early Christians, who tied it to Jesus’ birth (the “light of the world”).

• State-Sponsored Unity: Aurelian used Sol Invictus as a kind of imperial glue to keep the Roman Empire’s patchwork of cultures and religions somewhat harmonious.

The Vibe: Dies Natalis Solis Invicti wasn’t as wild as Saturnalia. It was more of a cosmic “new year” celebration, honouring the sun’s resilience and tying the natural world to divine power.

How These Festivals Shaped Christmas

Here’s where it gets juicy. The traditions of Yule and Christmas aren’t just similar—they’re practically twins separated at birth. When Christianity began spreading, church leaders knew they needed to replace these popular pagan festivals to win over the masses. The existing winter festivities provided the perfect framework for a winter celebration centred around Jesus’ birth. So, let’s have a look at how these celebrations feed into each other…

1. December 25th: This wasn’t chosen randomly. It coincided with Dies Natalis Solis Invicti, symbolising Christ as the new “sun” who brings light to the world. Jesus wasn’t even born in December, but hey, the symbolism worked.

2. Gift-Giving: The Romans were already doing this during Saturnalia. Christianity didn’t have to reinvent the wheel—it just gave the practice a religious spin by tying it to the Magi’s gifts to baby Jesus. The Yule tradition of exchanging gifts with family and spirits morphed into Christmas gift-giving. Add a fat bloke in a red suit (hello, Santa, you Wild Hunt knockoff), and you’ve got the modern tradition.

3. Feasting and Merriment: Early Christians kept these Saturnalian traditions alive, albeit with a bit more moderation (at least in theory). Over time, Christmas developed its own feasting culture that still mirrors the Roman orgies of food and drink— full on Roman binge and purge cycle optional. Whichever way you look at it, this season about excess—because what else are you going to do when it’s pitch-black by 4pm? Eat, drink, and pretend your drunk uncle isn’t about to start singing.

4. Lights in the Darkness: Both Saturnalia and Dies Natalis Solis Invicti focused on light returning to the world, a theme that fits neatly with the Christian narrative of Jesus bringing spiritual light to humanity. Yule fires, solstice candles, and Christmas lights all stem from the same primal fear of the dark. Humans just love lighting stuff up when the nights get long.

5. Evergreens Everywhere: Whether you’re hanging holly for Yule or decking the halls for Christmas, evergreen plants symbolise life, protection, and endurance. Christians slapped a Jesus sticker on it, calling it eternal life, but the symbolism remains the same.

Does it Really Matter?

So why does this tangled history of winter celebrations matter to modern witches? Because it reminds us that the season’s magic is universal. You don’t have to choose between Yule, Christmas, or the solstice—you can embrace all three, or none at all.

• Feeling cheeky? Throw a Saturnalia-inspired party with reversed roles, silly games, and a feast that would make Bacchus blush.

• Want to connect with the cosmos? Honour Dies Natalis Solis Invicti by meditating on the sun’s power and resilience.

• Need to keep the peace at Christmas dinner? Light a candle and reflect on the deeper, shared magic of the season.

• Celebrate Yule with a Yule log, wassailing, and a toast to Odin.

• Honour the solstice by lighting candles and reflecting on the year’s cycles.

Witchcraft thrives on adaptation. Take what resonates and leave the rest.

Syncretism, Not Theft

It’s tempting to yell, “Christians stole Yule! Get the pitchforks lads!” and storm off in a huff, but history is rarely that simple. Christianity didn’t steal Yule as much as it assimilated it. The Church knew people wouldn’t abandon their beloved pagan traditions, so it repackaged them with a Christian spin. Christmas isn’t about one culture “stealing” from another—it’s a dance of adaptation and evolution. Humans have always celebrated the light returning in winter, whether through Odin, Sol Invictus, or Jesus.

Is it frustrating? Sure. But it’s also a testament to how deeply connected humans are to nature’s cycles. Yule, Christmas, and the solstice all share a common thread: celebrating light in the darkness and finding hope during bleak times.

So, whether you’re raising a horn of mead to Odin, a glass of wine to Jesus, or just trying to survive another awkward family dinner, know this: the magic of the season is yours to claim.

Now go light a candle, pour yourself a drink, and enjoy the chaos of winter.

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  5. Homophones and Commonly Confused Words
    Homophones (words that sound alike but have different meanings, such as “there” and “their”) are a frequent source of errors. Similarly, words like “affect” and “effect” are often mixed up. Proofreaders will check for these subtle mistakes and ensure the correct word is used in each instance.

  6. Style Guide Adherence
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The Proofreading Process

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Key Focus Areas in Developmental Editing

A developmental editor provides feedback on several core aspects of your manuscript:

  1. Plot Structure and Pacing
    One of the primary elements a developmental editor will focus on is your story’s structure. Is the plot coherent, engaging, and well-organised? Does the narrative move at the right pace, or are there slow, dragging sections or parts that feel rushed? The editor will suggest ways to tighten the pacing, refine the plot, and eliminate any unnecessary or repetitive scenes. For non-fiction, this might mean evaluating the order of information to ensure that it’s logical and flows well.

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  3. Theme and Subplot
    Whether you’re working on fiction or non-fiction, thematic elements are important. In fiction, this involves analysing how well the theme ties into the plot and character arcs. Are there subplots that strengthen the main narrative, or are they distracting? In non-fiction, this means making sure that any underlying themes or arguments are clear and well-supported throughout the manuscript.

  4. Dialogue
    Dialogue can make or break a story. A developmental editor will look at the dialogue to see if it feels natural and authentic, while also serving the narrative. Does the dialogue move the plot forward? Are the characters’ voices distinct and true to their personalities? For non-fiction, this could translate into assessing tone and voice consistency throughout the manuscript.

  5. Consistency and Continuity
    One of the key roles of a developmental editor is to ensure the story’s internal logic holds up. Are there plot holes, inconsistencies, or timeline errors? Do the character arcs follow through in a believable way? For non-fiction, this might mean checking for consistency in terminology, argument development, or how sources are referenced.

  6. Reader Engagement
    Ultimately, the developmental editor will assess whether the manuscript keeps the reader engaged from start to finish. Are there sections that might cause the reader to lose interest? Is the ending satisfying, or does it feel rushed? Developmental editors provide valuable insight into how the manuscript resonates on an emotional level and how to maintain reader interest.

The Developmental Editing Process

Developmental editing is a collaborative process that involves an in-depth review and feedback cycle. Here’s how it typically works:

  1. Manuscript Evaluation
    The editor reads through the entire manuscript to get a full understanding of the story. They take note of major issues with plot, character development, pacing, and consistency.

  2. Feedback and Suggestions
    Once the initial review is complete, the editor provides detailed feedback. This could come in the form of an editorial report or comments within the manuscript itself. The feedback will highlight strengths, point out weaknesses, and provide actionable suggestions for improvement. These suggestions may include rewriting certain sections, removing or adding scenes, or reworking character arcs.

  3. Collaboration with the Author
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  4. Revisions and Review
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Common Challenges Addressed by Developmental Editing

Developmental editing is particularly useful for addressing the following common challenges:

  • Weak or inconsistent character development: Characters that feel flat, underdeveloped, or whose actions don’t match their motivations.
  • Pacing issues: A plot that moves too slowly, losing the reader’s interest, or too quickly, leaving important moments underdeveloped.
  • Plot holes and inconsistencies: Gaps in the story’s logic, unresolved subplots, or events that contradict earlier scenes.
  • Lack of clarity: Confusing scenes, unclear motivations, or disjointed narrative flow.
  • Dialogue issues: Dialogue that feels unnatural or out of character, or fails to move the plot forward.

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Copy and Line Editing

Copy editing and line editing are essential steps in the editing process, both focused on improving the clarity, readability, and overall quality of a manuscript. While they share some similarities, each serves a distinct purpose in polishing a text. Understanding the differences between copy editing and line editing is key to ensuring that your manuscript is as professional, engaging, and error-free as possible before publication.

What is Copy Editing?

Copy editing, often referred to as the technical phase of editing, focuses on improving the mechanics of writing. It involves a close examination of grammar, spelling, punctuation, syntax, and overall sentence structure. A copy editor ensures that the text is accurate, clear, and free from inconsistencies or errors, without making significant changes to the author’s voice or style.

This type of editing also addresses issues of consistency. For instance, are character names and places spelled the same way throughout the manuscript? Is there consistency in capitalisation, hyphenation, and the use of numbers? A copy editor works to make sure the manuscript adheres to a specific style guide, whether it’s a publisher’s in-house guide, a standard like the Oxford Style Manual, or a custom set of rules provided by the author.

In British English, it’s especially important for copy editors to be aware of spelling differences, punctuation rules, and even grammar conventions that differ from other forms of English, particularly American English.

What is Line Editing?

Line editing is a more in-depth, stylistic form of editing, focusing on the way language is used in the manuscript. While copy editing focuses on correctness, line editing is concerned with how the text flows, how the sentences are constructed, and how the language conveys meaning and emotion. Line editing looks at the rhythm of the prose, the choice of words, and how effectively the author’s voice is communicated.

A line editor examines each sentence and paragraph to ensure that the writing is clear, smooth, and engaging. This might involve reworking clunky sentences, tightening up dialogue, or even rearranging sentences to improve flow. Line editing does not usually involve significant changes to the plot or character development, but it might include suggestions to cut repetitive or redundant sections, or to improve weak transitions between ideas.

In short, copy editing is about correctness and consistency, whereas line editing is about style and readability.

Key Focus Areas in Copy Editing

  1. Spelling, Grammar, and Punctuation
    Copy editing ensures that all spelling, grammar, and punctuation follow British English standards. This includes addressing any spelling differences (such as “colour” versus “color”), checking for correct use of commas, semicolons, and apostrophes, and ensuring subject-verb agreement.

  2. Syntax and Sentence Structure
    Copy editors improve sentence structure for clarity and readability. This involves correcting any awkward or unclear sentences, addressing misplaced modifiers, and ensuring that sentence fragments or run-ons are resolved.

  3. Consistency
    One of the main roles of a copy editor is to ensure consistency throughout the manuscript. This includes checking for consistent spelling of names, proper formatting of dates and numbers, and the uniform use of British versus American spelling or terminology.

  4. Style Guide Adherence
    If a specific style guide is being followed, the copy editor will ensure the manuscript adheres to its rules. For example, whether the Oxford comma is used, how dialogue is formatted, and how citations or references are handled.

  5. Fact-Checking
    While a copy editor is not responsible for heavy fact-checking, they may flag obvious factual errors or inconsistencies that could affect the credibility of the manuscript.

Key Focus Areas in Line Editing

  1. Word Choice and Vocabulary
    Line editors look closely at the author’s word choice, ensuring that the vocabulary is appropriate, varied, and impactful. They might suggest alternative words or phrases to enhance clarity, precision, or emotional resonance.

  2. Sentence Flow and Structure
    Line editing focuses on how sentences and paragraphs flow together. This involves making sentences smoother, eliminating repetition, and ensuring that transitions between ideas are natural and effective. The aim is to enhance readability and keep the reader engaged.

  3. Tone and Style
    Maintaining the author’s voice while improving the overall tone and style is crucial in line editing. This might involve tweaking dialogue to sound more natural, adjusting the pacing of sentences to match the mood, or ensuring that the tone is consistent throughout the manuscript.

  4. Clarity and Impact
    Line editing aims to ensure that each sentence is as clear and impactful as possible. This means removing redundancies, improving descriptions, and ensuring that the narrative flows seamlessly without distractions.

  5. Dialogue Enhancement
    In fiction, line editing often involves improving the dialogue, making sure it sounds natural and true to each character’s voice. It also ensures that dialogue serves the story, either by advancing the plot or developing the characters.

The Differences Between Copy Editing and Line Editing

Although both copy and line editing are essential for improving a manuscript, they focus on different aspects of the text:

  • Level of Detail: Copy editing focuses on correcting technical issues, while line editing looks at the style and readability of the manuscript.
  • Scope of Changes: Copy editing typically involves making smaller, more precise corrections (e.g., fixing punctuation or grammar), whereas line editing can involve rephrasing sentences or rearranging sections to improve flow.
  • Objective: Copy editing aims to ensure that the text is correct and consistent, adhering to grammatical rules and style guides. Line editing, on the other hand, aims to improve the reader’s experience by ensuring that the language is engaging, clear, and smooth.
  • Timing in the Editing Process: Copy editing usually takes place after developmental editing but before the final proofreading. Line editing typically occurs before copy editing, though some manuscripts may undergo both processes simultaneously depending on the level of detail required.

When to Choose Copy Editing or Line Editing

If your manuscript has already been through substantial revisions and the story, character development, or argument is solid, copy editing is the next step. It ensures that your manuscript is polished, free of technical errors, and ready for the final proofreading stage.

However, if you’re still fine-tuning the way your sentences flow, or if you feel your writing could benefit from improved clarity and style, line editing is what you need. Line editing helps refine the language, making sure your prose reads smoothly and your voice comes through clearly.

In many cases, a manuscript will benefit from both line editing and copy editing, as each phase addresses different aspects of the writing.

The Benefits of Copy and Line Editing

Both types of editing play a critical role in preparing a manuscript for publication. By investing in copy and line editing, authors can ensure that their writing is professional, engaging, and free of distractions for the reader. Clear, well-structured writing reflects positively on the author, making it easier for readers to connect with the story or argument and enjoy the overall reading experience.

For authors preparing a manuscript for traditional or self-publishing, these editing stages can make the difference between a good manuscript and a great one. Whether it’s correcting technical issues or refining the voice and style, copy and line editing ensure that your work stands out as polished and professional.