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The Wheel’s Winter Threshold

After an entirely shitty day on Tuesday, feeling ill (I couldn’t even work, so I must have had it bad), and feeling miserable about missing the mornings snowy fun, Jamie suggested that I go out to play in afternoon when I started to feel a little more human.

Now, wow.

The snow has had a profound impact upon reclaiming something sacred in me —namely my connection to the Craft, the joy of creativity, and the freedom to simply be in my magick. This isn’t just about snowballs and lanterns; it’s a return to my magickal self, untainted by politics, expectations, rules, and the general bullshit I endured whilst working at a certain unorganised ‘organisation.’

Witchling kicked it off by announcing we were going to collect snow. This prompted that little itch inside of me, the need to get my creatrix on and enjoy this frozen gift – illness be damned!

So, an act of witchy gratitude was concocted- threshold magick combined with snowy solstice blessings and a daffodil-filled log! Incidently, the log we have outside our front door (here’s one I prepared earlier style).

The daffodils are such a perfect symbol for hope and light, rising up through the cold, we decided a lantern was needed for some warm, guiding energy. Herbs were combined during tea-time, adding a potent pop. The remit—protection, courage, and fiery transformation with a touch of winter resilience. What we used: cloves, cayenne, salt, rosemary. Red carnation, centaury, blue cohosh and ginger.

Thresholds are gateways between the mundane and the magickal, and I reckon this ritual truly embodies that liminal energy. The log, the daffodils, the lantern, and the snow all working together feel like the opening of a magickal portal, a space where intention flows freely. Plus, it looks stunning.

The daffodils are our central focus, the main vessel for our intentions. We are aiming for our wishes to be carried into the flowers, envisioning them wrapped in magick as they continued to grow. Adding the herb blend around the base of the daffodils crafted a ring of protection and prosperity – and a chant always adds extra power, Witchling did enjoy joining in!

“Light and snow, fire and bloom, Bless this threshold, banish gloom. Let daffodils rise and magick take hold, Threshold blessed with power bold.”

We repeated it three times as we sprinkled the herbs.

Then, we fashioned some little balls of snow to act as temporary offerings. We made 8 – one for each sabbat. As they melt, they’ll “feed” the daffodils for the entire spin of the Wheel, carrying our Magick within.

Our lantern acts as the guiding force, illuminating our blessing and threshold. When we lit it, we whispered this to the fledging flame…

“Lantern bright, guide the way, Through the longest night to Solstice Day. Fire burns, the wheel does turn, Blessings to this home return.”

Hopefully, its light will act as a beacon for protection, prosperity, and renewal as we light it each night in the run up to the Winter Solstice.

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  5. Consistency and Continuity
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Copy and Line Editing

Copy editing and line editing are essential steps in the editing process, both focused on improving the clarity, readability, and overall quality of a manuscript. While they share some similarities, each serves a distinct purpose in polishing a text. Understanding the differences between copy editing and line editing is key to ensuring that your manuscript is as professional, engaging, and error-free as possible before publication.

What is Copy Editing?

Copy editing, often referred to as the technical phase of editing, focuses on improving the mechanics of writing. It involves a close examination of grammar, spelling, punctuation, syntax, and overall sentence structure. A copy editor ensures that the text is accurate, clear, and free from inconsistencies or errors, without making significant changes to the author’s voice or style.

This type of editing also addresses issues of consistency. For instance, are character names and places spelled the same way throughout the manuscript? Is there consistency in capitalisation, hyphenation, and the use of numbers? A copy editor works to make sure the manuscript adheres to a specific style guide, whether it’s a publisher’s in-house guide, a standard like the Oxford Style Manual, or a custom set of rules provided by the author.

In British English, it’s especially important for copy editors to be aware of spelling differences, punctuation rules, and even grammar conventions that differ from other forms of English, particularly American English.

What is Line Editing?

Line editing is a more in-depth, stylistic form of editing, focusing on the way language is used in the manuscript. While copy editing focuses on correctness, line editing is concerned with how the text flows, how the sentences are constructed, and how the language conveys meaning and emotion. Line editing looks at the rhythm of the prose, the choice of words, and how effectively the author’s voice is communicated.

A line editor examines each sentence and paragraph to ensure that the writing is clear, smooth, and engaging. This might involve reworking clunky sentences, tightening up dialogue, or even rearranging sentences to improve flow. Line editing does not usually involve significant changes to the plot or character development, but it might include suggestions to cut repetitive or redundant sections, or to improve weak transitions between ideas.

In short, copy editing is about correctness and consistency, whereas line editing is about style and readability.

Key Focus Areas in Copy Editing

  1. Spelling, Grammar, and Punctuation
    Copy editing ensures that all spelling, grammar, and punctuation follow British English standards. This includes addressing any spelling differences (such as “colour” versus “color”), checking for correct use of commas, semicolons, and apostrophes, and ensuring subject-verb agreement.

  2. Syntax and Sentence Structure
    Copy editors improve sentence structure for clarity and readability. This involves correcting any awkward or unclear sentences, addressing misplaced modifiers, and ensuring that sentence fragments or run-ons are resolved.

  3. Consistency
    One of the main roles of a copy editor is to ensure consistency throughout the manuscript. This includes checking for consistent spelling of names, proper formatting of dates and numbers, and the uniform use of British versus American spelling or terminology.

  4. Style Guide Adherence
    If a specific style guide is being followed, the copy editor will ensure the manuscript adheres to its rules. For example, whether the Oxford comma is used, how dialogue is formatted, and how citations or references are handled.

  5. Fact-Checking
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Key Focus Areas in Line Editing

  1. Word Choice and Vocabulary
    Line editors look closely at the author’s word choice, ensuring that the vocabulary is appropriate, varied, and impactful. They might suggest alternative words or phrases to enhance clarity, precision, or emotional resonance.

  2. Sentence Flow and Structure
    Line editing focuses on how sentences and paragraphs flow together. This involves making sentences smoother, eliminating repetition, and ensuring that transitions between ideas are natural and effective. The aim is to enhance readability and keep the reader engaged.

  3. Tone and Style
    Maintaining the author’s voice while improving the overall tone and style is crucial in line editing. This might involve tweaking dialogue to sound more natural, adjusting the pacing of sentences to match the mood, or ensuring that the tone is consistent throughout the manuscript.

  4. Clarity and Impact
    Line editing aims to ensure that each sentence is as clear and impactful as possible. This means removing redundancies, improving descriptions, and ensuring that the narrative flows seamlessly without distractions.

  5. Dialogue Enhancement
    In fiction, line editing often involves improving the dialogue, making sure it sounds natural and true to each character’s voice. It also ensures that dialogue serves the story, either by advancing the plot or developing the characters.

The Differences Between Copy Editing and Line Editing

Although both copy and line editing are essential for improving a manuscript, they focus on different aspects of the text:

  • Level of Detail: Copy editing focuses on correcting technical issues, while line editing looks at the style and readability of the manuscript.
  • Scope of Changes: Copy editing typically involves making smaller, more precise corrections (e.g., fixing punctuation or grammar), whereas line editing can involve rephrasing sentences or rearranging sections to improve flow.
  • Objective: Copy editing aims to ensure that the text is correct and consistent, adhering to grammatical rules and style guides. Line editing, on the other hand, aims to improve the reader’s experience by ensuring that the language is engaging, clear, and smooth.
  • Timing in the Editing Process: Copy editing usually takes place after developmental editing but before the final proofreading. Line editing typically occurs before copy editing, though some manuscripts may undergo both processes simultaneously depending on the level of detail required.

When to Choose Copy Editing or Line Editing

If your manuscript has already been through substantial revisions and the story, character development, or argument is solid, copy editing is the next step. It ensures that your manuscript is polished, free of technical errors, and ready for the final proofreading stage.

However, if you’re still fine-tuning the way your sentences flow, or if you feel your writing could benefit from improved clarity and style, line editing is what you need. Line editing helps refine the language, making sure your prose reads smoothly and your voice comes through clearly.

In many cases, a manuscript will benefit from both line editing and copy editing, as each phase addresses different aspects of the writing.

The Benefits of Copy and Line Editing

Both types of editing play a critical role in preparing a manuscript for publication. By investing in copy and line editing, authors can ensure that their writing is professional, engaging, and free of distractions for the reader. Clear, well-structured writing reflects positively on the author, making it easier for readers to connect with the story or argument and enjoy the overall reading experience.

For authors preparing a manuscript for traditional or self-publishing, these editing stages can make the difference between a good manuscript and a great one. Whether it’s correcting technical issues or refining the voice and style, copy and line editing ensure that your work stands out as polished and professional.